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Silent, No More
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Phyllis Jean Green's "Battlefield, Night" inspired this --- thank you for remembering the cost, the cost, the terrible cost!

Sacrifices, obeyed
at the hands of leaders
who've no idea of
what they're asking:  the cost,
the cost, the terrible
cost stains their hands blood red,
one that cannot be washed
away or forgotten ---
and yet, they turn their backs,
hardening hearts, turning
deaf ears to Veterans
thanked by being shuffled
and lost in paperwork ---
we're here.  Somewhere, we're here:
and we will remember.
We are silent, no more.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (5/17)

 


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 Reviews of "Silent, No More"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
Karla, your poetry is always shedding light on those who need the help...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
A very forceful statement of the sad way our vets are used and abused.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
My twin brother is being processed out from Iraq in Ind,with his unit,he seems to be dong ok....now my son heads back for round 2 soon.....thanks telling write,
stan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
yet, they turn their backs,
hardening hearts, turning
deaf ears to Veterans
thanked by being shuffled
and lost in paperwork ---

It's very sadly been this way for far too long now. And we should all be speaking out about it.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
POwerful writing, Karla. Excellent work.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Great write.. The cost is horiffic! The ones who survive , pay a price. You are RIGHT,, more attention needs to be paid to our vets. The war needs to stop , too many are dying!........M

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
The politicians should be forced to be on watch among the Arlington graves, alone, in a raining night, from dust to dawn, with their hands tied on their back, as many night as they need until they understand the plight of the soldier that they so light handed send to war.

Georg

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Where is gratitude? Sad.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
good write and good for you!

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Let that reverberate a few too many decibles in a few ears... !

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Very well said Karla. I wish there was no such thing as war. Could you imagine two countries playing basketball instead of shooting each other? I can, but unfortunately it will never happen. This is a poem that reminds me of the song The Night The Lights Went Out In Gorgia. We should never trust our souls to no backwodds country leader, because he has blood stains on his hands.

May The Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
We, perhaps, are (too slowly) working toward the day when we will gladly out-source (to Mars?) the Pentagon mentality which coldly deals in risk, advantages, acceptable losses - numbers - and treats soldiers as human fodder to be celebrated but not cared for. Oops, my podium is showing.

Ted

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Nor should you be! Thank God for you!! Especially those of you who
refuse to sit back and be quiet, as the establishment would have you
do. B r a v a, my friend, B R A V A !! <3 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
I understand this well...such a sad fact about the state of man...well said Karla

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Well said, Karla! hugs

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
We are silent, not more. I hope you're right.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. This citizen doesn't want what is going on with the Vets to continue. Couldn't believe they had let it get so bad in the first place. Rotting ceilings and walls. And still the abuse goes on with VA's refusal to diagnose a war Vet with post traumatic stress disorder. Criminal. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Intense write, excellent.

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Hi Karla, you know I'm a vet, but who's listening? People with their opinions, they don't do anything. They're the ones who vote the non-listeners and non-doers into office.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
...you have well penned what needs to be said...your strong voice is heard here...and in agreement...I appreciate you...your thoughts...and all those who fight for our country.
well done Karla...
John

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
We owe our freedom and safety to those men and women whom choose to fight for our country, protect our children, and whom serve with pride. It takes a special person to volunteer to put themselves in harms way, to stand up and fight for themselves as well as their country and others. Well done my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Karla~

Our military men and women should be our first priority: nothing but the BEST for them!! None should be homeless or hungry!! None should lack for the medical care given to government leaders instead of the leftovers. SHAME! Powerfully penned call for action! Very well written!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Nor should we be...e

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Excellent poem with factual concept, but we should also keep in mind their is no draft, and blaming just leaders is not the whole story. We need to make our votes count and also remember that the same story is enacted during and after every war no matter whether the administration is Reps or Dems. What we need is more people to join together to change the process we use to go to war. ET

Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Do you think the establishment cares about these people? Well done, Karla! Safi

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Well done, Karla! Our troops and veterans need our continuted support in any means we can offer.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
To those that have the bravery, to stand in harms way to protect the freedom and rights of all Americans. We owe nothing less than the very best. JMW

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Bravo Karla, our troops and vets should be our first priority. We have to make the Government aware. God Bless you for this. Love and prayers Bonnie

Reviewed on May 17, 2008
I was listening to CNN last night and one of the sentators I can not remembeer which was talking about being against benefits for our troops and for the widows of troops
God Bless
Michelle~


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