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Breathe the Sun
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... keep thinking, 'Only six more weeks until the start of Autumn': ....


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August weighs heavily on
the spine, folding head to
knees.  Excessive heat
warning makes me dizzy

for any cooling relief:  105
degrees to continue for at
least the next seven days,
with indices approaching

110, more likely above ---
no choice but to breathe
the sun.  As I make my
way around town, keep

thinking, 'Only six more
weeks until the start of
Autumn':  can't get here
quick enough for me ...

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (8/1)

 


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 Reviews of "Breathe the Sun"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 7, 2008
--"to everything there is a season" -- and so it is to summer belongs the heat of Sol -- autumn weather is normally beautiful -- but alas, it is the portent of winter! -- without which I can do nicely -- God bless --JMW

Reviewed on August 5, 2008
Optimistically: "Autumn can't get here quick enough for me..."
Me, too, Karla! Been staying indoors in the AC as much as possible; outdoor chores completed in the mornings :o) My grocery shopping (a must-do tomorrow or Thurs) consists of salad-makings: greens, tuna, chicken, and two half gals. of orange or lime sherbets - the latter really cooling! I feel like I've filled a swimming pool...all the water I've been drinking LOL
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on August 3, 2008
...something to be said for every season...each with its own personality.
enjoyed Karla...
John

Reviewed on August 2, 2008
Karla this is so true, I too am going to be glad when Autum starts, the cool of will do us all good
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
My sympathies are with you, Karla. I find that kind of heat totally oppressive. We are very fortunate here. It is a most temperate summer thus far. Thank you for sharing. Amour et paix, ton ami de la C-B, Canada,

Régis

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
Breathe the Sun? that phrase sounds like something Tinkerbell would say to a night moth without it getting burnt by its light.

Georg

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
I am looking forward to my favorite time of year too Karla, a great write and I just love that pic. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
Breathing the Sun - something many of us are doing these stifling days.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 2, 2008
This too shall pass, lovely weather lady. I can smell October. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
Relentless until the end and all we can do is pray for cooler weather....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
Wish upon the Dog Star, Karla...quench your thirst with a bowl of stars...Hot damn Dog Days! It's not parching your poetry any...it's breathing right on along...be well you and Karen Lynn.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
Then you will be bitching about too much rain, or too little, or too much wind or too little...is not this life as we know it anyway...Ed

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
Hi Karla,I can't stand the heat,but I know that summer will soon be over.A very good poem,Hang in there and don't get stress out in the heat.The cool weather is coming :-).take care

Edwin

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
To endure, to endure is always a challenge, one I understand all the year round, and no matter how familiar the heat is it's never easy. May rain come thundering down to cool you, Karla, and thank you for this lovely piece.
John

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
Jill said what is everyone's mind. Will atumn bring the cool weather, or will we still have stifling heat? This is a very true piece, Karla, thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom youlove, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
Can't agree with you more especially as I am going to Loudon NH for my first live NASCAR race. Well done write.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
Good write but I can tell the heat's getting to you. Check your spelling my friend. Seriously tho, well done.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
Karla,
Six more weeks until Autumn, but will the heat break by then? The State of Texas, as a whole, moved National Night Out to the first Tuesday in October, as a trial this year, because temperatures, on average, are 8 degrees cooler, then. Did our idiot officials in my community move ours? Nope. We're having it Tuesday night on a day that should bring record-setting triple-digit heat to the Texas Coastline. I'll be outside slapping mosquitoes and baking in the heat, while everyone else in the state is waiting for their October block parties! But, I digress.

I'm praying for a cool snap and soon. I'm beyond being tired of it being 85 degrees at 7 a.m. and 100 by 1:30.

Take care and stay cool. I love the photo, taken in February!

Jill

Reviewed on August 1, 2008
I am looking forward to the start of fall, too. Look at it this way: at least you haven't melted; your pen still writes! LOL Poetry hot enough to burn through the screen and into the readers' minds. :) Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)


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