The shhhhhhhhh of rain
silences all in its falling:
none dare disturb the holy
hush except a rumble of
thunder echoing through
celestial corridors of sky.
Congregants below kneel
in thanksgiving, for God
heard their cries for mercy.
He opened up the Heavens,
what had been sewn shut ...
beautiful, lifegiving rain!
Such soothing warm words spoken and felt here Karla!
Thank you
This storm picture is amazing! dark, disturbing but welcomed!
Your poem touched me deeply this morning!
Thank you for sharing it!
Much love to you and yours!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings of Love and Bright Light, Warrior Purpe Lady SHEExooo
God Bless YOU!
you speak with a kind of hushed knowledge to share these thoughts of great wisdom and understanding Karla -- this is a very spiritual poem that arouses the image we share of God's wondrous gifts to us --much peace, love, and joy to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2009
You make the lightening and storms ....beautiful with your words!
Nice!
"the shhhhhhhhh of rain". Now THAT'S neat! Perfect description! Very well penned; glad to see the rain too, although it kills our bodies (and makes our feet wet! EWWW! LOL)! Well done, Karla; brava! Love the piccy, too; sorta looks like a heart in the heavens! :) Or an angel!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Karla,
A gracious ode to what is for me the loveliest of all natural moments, the falling of rain after a dry spell. You've written this wonderfully, with your soul.
John
Beautiful way to look at the wonders of the rain...well done and very well written write of the rain and thunder...which many see as a mear inconvenience you see as such a beautiful wonder....love, Bonnie
Thank you
This storm picture is amazing! dark, disturbing but welcomed!
Your poem touched me deeply this morning!
Thank you for sharing it!
Much love to you and yours!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings of Love and Bright Light, Warrior Purpe Lady SHEExooo
God Bless YOU!
Sheila
Nice!
Regis
Sandie Angel :o)
Nice write, Karla!
Do you hear flutes? :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Be always safe,
Karen
Love,
Eileen
Georg
Fee
Marvelously penned, StormSpinner!
As usual this is beautiful! You capture God's creation in such a vivid way!
Cynthia
In Christs Love
Michelle~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Cryssa
With Love,
Cindy
A gracious ode to what is for me the loveliest of all natural moments, the falling of rain after a dry spell. You've written this wonderfully, with your soul.
John