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Dynamite Comes In Small Packages ...
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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OUCH. Pulling weeds, I found another thing, entirely.

You wonder why God created some things ....

Image (c) 2006, Karla Dorman


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You wonder why God
created some things ...
the sun, bad enough
without added fire
from the ground.  Pulling
weeds, I found something
else, entirely -
skin came alive with
a shout, "OW that hurts!"
Leaped up, slapping at
the covering of
ants swarming my wrist
like a glove.  Blisters
formed, itching, burning
pain, marks that will scar,
that will remind me
of my encounter
with the Texas heat -
not just the weather,
but fire ant bites, too.

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (4/8)


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 Reviews of "Dynamite Comes In Small Packages ..."
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
Yikes, Karla! I can't stand bugs. I love the outdoors more in my head than I do in person. lol. Strong visual in this poem. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 14, 2009
This picture is amazing!!!! If it's one of yours, then my friend you are an awesome photographer!! Your poem was scary!! I can't stand a swarm of anything. Good write though...you got my attention. I'm not familiar with fire ants, but I heard on the news recently that they have been found here in New Brunswick, Canada. They must be able to survive the Canadian winter...giggle...I never want to experience what you did with them.

Anna

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 12, 2009
ouch is right--the picture is lovely though

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2009
Thinking of you dear friend, love Holly

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
i experienced fire ants in Florida once as well as the every afternoon thunder storms ... not a pleasant experience ... you capture these phenomena well ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
My goodness Karla! I hope you have the right salve for those ant bites. they can be dangerous!Please take care,and stay out of the sun!!!Always a good poem, regardless of the circumstance;-) Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
Fireants I am quite familiar with those critters
I hate them and I take action against them
I sprinkle my lawn and all recognized anthills
with a repellent that kills them .....
they don't bother me anymore
if you see an anthill poure boling water over it
it works just as good
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
I can relate to the fire ants and weeds. Sadly the heat here is not doing much for our growing veggies!....M

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
Totally relate Karla.
Those little buggers are omnivorous too,
They eat plants and animals.
Try a flamethrower next time.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 9, 2009
A well written poem,I hope you are doing alright,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on July 9, 2009
Very nice writing sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 9, 2009
I never knew they existed but met up with them when I went to
florida, glad they are not in Jersey...maybe wear gloves, though if they get inside they may be worse...hope your pain subsides...e &

Reviewed by Nicole Weaver
Reviewed on July 9, 2009
A true poet , capable of capturing any and every experience and put it into prose. Brilliant!
Nicole

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
As long as they keep Jersey Ed away.....

EDvard


Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Oh boy do they ever!! Been bitten a number of times and it is not funny. I am so sorry. Soak your hands in peroxide, it will take the sting and inch away. Ooooooooouch!!!

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
fire ants, vicious little creatures that impart and enduring pain --they attacked my mother-in-law once -- it was not a pretty sight -- the scars they left -- I love the beautiful photograph -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Ouch! That sounds awful Karla. Hope your o.k.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
This year seems to be an abundance of the little buggers, even up here in Nova Scotia we are finding infestations of them.

fee

Reviewed on July 8, 2009
A great write, thank you for sharing, I hate fire ants those suckers hurt OUCH
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
geeeesh...gotta keep looking up and down at the same time...be careful there Karla!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Dear Karla, you have my condolences. The bite and sting of nature's
wee creatures come at us in many forms. Out here, in the heat of summer, we have the dreaded greenhead flies. Given half a chance
the damn things, like vampires, will bleed you dry. -gene.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
EVEN BEFORE I READ YOUR WORK, I READ THE SHORT SYNOPSIS AND IMMEDIATELY THOUGHT OF THESE ANTS. THOUGH I WAS BORN AND RAISED UP NORTH, MY PARENTS WERE FROM THE SOUTH AND AS A CHILD, I VISITED THE SOUTH FROM TIME TO TIME DURING THE SUMMER. I PICKED COTTON ON A RELATIVE'S FARM LAND WHERE I LEARNED ABOUT THOSE LITTLE CRITTERS THAT WE CALLED 'RED ANTS'. ONE BITE WAS BAD ENOUGH, BUT I IMAGINE THAT A SWARM OF THEM DID A WHOLE LOT OF DAMAGE...OUCH! THIS PIECE IS WELL WRITTEN WITH THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT STIRRED UP OLD MEMORIES. THANKS FOR THE SHARE. BLESSINGS. JOYCE

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Nasty little things aren't they. I find that they are just another good reason to avoid pulling weeds. Let the ants have them I say. Patrick. Gorgeous photo by the way

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Fire ants... reminds me of home. I hate those little things. I read that researchers are importing yet another natural predator to combat them. I wonder how long it will take for this new bug to bug us. Loved the poem.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Ouch ! That had to hurt.

Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Yikes! I've heard about fire ants. Actually I remember one of my favorite movie scenes ... from the TV series 'V.' The leader of the aliens holds out a divided candy dish with several assortments of ants spilling out (if you remember, they were reptilian) and says, "Try the red ones, they're spicy."

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Ouch! Hope they heal soon... :~)
Cryssa

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Good word spoken, even with the ants, this too shall pass. Enjoyed your poem.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
Oh my, your poem brought me to your pain. I will send you some healing energy, hopefully you will be okay real soon!!! I loved your photo, they are always amazing as are your poems.
Stay well, and keep smiling...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on July 8, 2009
OW!! This one made me hurt! Sorry you had an encounter with the dreaded fire ant; they ARE painful when they bite! They are very well named! Hope you feel better soon; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
You described your experience well. I can certainly identify with you because I've been bitten so much when I work outside that I have tiny red scars on my legs to prove it. (Be glad the weren't those yellow jackets that build a nest in the ground. I was stung by a WHOLE BUNCH of them one time and that certainly is no fun.)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 8, 2009
All things have their place in nature, Grasshopper. And be very careful, out there.

PS: Box some up and send them to old Jersey Devil Ed!!!


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