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f-5 tornado (fiction)
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i've been in three tornadoes.

thank God, none have been this bad.

each, however, stands out vividly in my memory.

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with pent up fury

the demon wind roars

stalking the darkness

hunting new victims

like a spoiled child

weary of its toys

it picks some of them

and throws them away

and smashes others

under wrathful feet

smash! there goes a house

crash! another one

that neighborhood is

now a parking lot

the crushed hulls of cars

litter the landscape

those that could escape

cower at the noise

that the demon makes

as it rapes the land

the demon wind is

not very choosy

who will live or die

it aims to destroy

all who encounter

it will remember

the experience

the rest of their lives

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 Reviews of "f-5 tornado (fiction)"
Reviewed by colleen
Reviewed on January 27, 2003
It's stupid

Reviewed by Little Miss...
Reviewed on January 27, 2003
Karla..
Excellant protrayal of a portable madness!
Take care,
Love Jilly & John x

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
awesome!

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Fantastic write Karla,
I viewed the picture
quite clear...

Trixie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Karla your metaphor is fantastic...you brought this to life!...

Reviewed by (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Who knows where the tornado walks.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Excellent. Tornadoes can be quite deadly.

Reviewed on January 26, 2003
love the comparison and imagery you used in this intense write; could almost imagine the tornado's fury! awesome, on-the-edge-of-your-seat action in this poem! very good write, karla! with much love, your twin, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
"like a spoiled child

weary of its toys

it picks some of them

and throws them away "

AWESOME WRITING LADY!!!!


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