one of my
greatest pleasures
as a kid in ohio
was catching
lightning bugs
fireflies
don't see them much
anymore
not like i used to
and how i miss them
right around sunset
you'd look and
::blink::
a sudden tiny light
::blink::
look look another one
::blink::
there's one over there
::blink:: ::blink::
there's some over here
lookit by the woods
there's a whole mess of em
::blink:: ::blink:: ::blink:: ::blink::
mom can we catch lightning bugs
she'd get us a container
if glass she'd say
don't run
you'll fall and break it
you'll cut yourself
and away we'd go
::blink::
come to papa
::blink:: ::blink::
rats i missed
::blink::
GOT ya
then when we'd catch one
we'd say
*i wonder
i wonder
why lightning bugs
don't thunder*
i don't know why
tradition i suppose
but we always said it
::blink::
karen there's one on your head
aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
then she'd get mad
::blink:: ::blink::
got im
we'd catch a whole mess of em
oooooh pretty
watch them flashing
some slow :: b l i n k:: ::b l i n k::
some in rapid fire succession
:blinkblinkblinkblink::
we'd watch them awhile
and then
let them go
watching as they traced
patterns of light
in the darkness of night
zigzagging here and there
competing with the stars
lights above
lights below
o, how we loved
to watch them glow
Karla, you made me smile and brought back such good memories of my childhood. I too loved to catch lightening bugs. Thanks for the trip back to my childhood....smile
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2003
Wonderful write Karla! Keeps the Child inside full of wonder.
Really like this ending:
"watching as they traced
patterns of light
in the darkness of night
zigzagging here and there
competing with the stars
lights above
lights below
o, how we loved
to watch them glow"
Wonderful remembrances you gave me Karla, catching them in jars hiding them under dark covers to see them glow in the house, then letting them go;-)lovely whimsical write
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2003
We use to do the buggs lighting up and kids chasing them with clapping hands and shouts....
Excellent
PJ
Hi Karla
LOVE the pic of you two on your bio page!
Beautiful! -- And the poem is a charmer--been hearing a lot about th Joy of lightening bugs for children lately.
I've been traveling a lot, but I'll be around
Love Vicky
Ah, Karla, I got to see some in Wisconsin on vacation!! And deer, lots of deer, one doe had 3 fawns! And one jumped out in front of us in midmorning, couldn't believe it!! Thanks for the memories of firefly summers! :)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2003
I enjoy the lighting bugs too! I was blinking and watching a few of them last night. Wonderful write.
Oh yes Karla, lighting bugs. The same in Illinois...I was so fascinated by them. Used to punch airholes in a canning jar and catch the fly flies at night and watch the glow build up. Today I would love to just passively see them again. They were so beautiful. Bill Murray
A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
This book won 'The Poetry Category'
Really like this ending:
"watching as they traced
patterns of light
in the darkness of night
zigzagging here and there
competing with the stars
lights above
lights below
o, how we loved
to watch them glow"
~Joseph
Love Tinka
Excellent
PJ
They Think It's Those Lights In There Heads When There LOADED On Drugs!
TRASK
LOVE the pic of you two on your bio page!
Beautiful! -- And the poem is a charmer--been hearing a lot about th Joy of lightening bugs for children lately.
I've been traveling a lot, but I'll be around
Love Vicky
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
John