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it was a dark and stormy night...(revised, reposted)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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thunderstorms that have
(so far) managed to
avoid north central
texas (where i live,
anyway) try to
move in.  they gather,
plotting and planning
their war strategy.

spidery fingers
of lightning stroke the
turbulent, stygian
clouds.  a tremendous
drumroll of thunder
announces that the
battle has begun.

warriors attack.

the walls of my home
tremble in fear; what
i thought was shelter
may become my grave.
lightning stabs down, in
a search and destroy
mission: and it has
its sites locked on me.

wind-driven rain and
hail tattoo against
suddenly fragile
walls; they seek to gain
entrance, or to make
me go mad with fear;
either way, i am
a storm casualty.

(C) karla dorman, 2003.


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 Reviews of "it was a dark and stormy night...(revised, reposted)"
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Terrific imagery. I could hear the staccato pounding of the rain and feel the electricity of the storm.

Well done, Karla
Bobbi

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Oh what a scary pic you painted with your words Karla.
Hope everything is over by now.
Love
Nico

Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Excellent poem, keep up the great work...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Karla...good imagery....enjoyed reading this "stormy" poem....floria

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Very descritive of a storm.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
It was a great write before, and a great one now. **kotc**

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
YOu portrayed this with expertise giving a chilling account...well done!

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Excellent, Karla. Powerful description of the storm.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Many More Dark Stormy Nights To Come!

TRASK

Reviewed on September 28, 2003
good expression of your fear poetically Karla. good luck and prayers, G

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
i enjoyed this

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Hey they were the first words I used in my first story, I thought all authors started their stories that way, LOL!
But really, Karla, what a powerful write, I can feel your fear and can imagine Natures wrath "raining" down on you! Hope you are well and be not afraid, "this too shall pass," ED

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Great revision! Glad you shared this with us :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Most outstanding write Katla!!

Love Tinak

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
This is outstanding Karla. Beautifully written.
Love
~Chrissie xx

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
What a Powerful write Karla! Oh I feel for you with the storms! Even I get scared at the fierce ones!

Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Outstanding word usage and imagery, Karla; I was blown away by this stormy write! Truly enjoyed! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D Love you, Karla! :D


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