thunderstorms that have (so far) managed to avoid north central texas (where i live, anyway) try to move in. they gather, plotting and planning their war strategy.
spidery fingers of lightning stroke the turbulent, stygian clouds. a tremendous drumroll of thunder announces that the battle has begun. warriors attack.
the walls of my home tremble in fear; what i thought was shelter may become my grave. lightning stabs down, in a search and destroy mission: and it has its sites locked on me.
wind-driven rain and hail tattoo against suddenly fragile walls; they seek to gain entrance, or to make me go mad with fear; either way, i am a storm casualty.
(C) karla dorman, 2003.
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Hey they were the first words I used in my first story, I thought all authors started their stories that way, LOL!
But really, Karla, what a powerful write, I can feel your fear and can imagine Natures wrath "raining" down on you! Hope you are well and be not afraid, "this too shall pass," ED
Outstanding word usage and imagery, Karla; I was blown away by this stormy write! Truly enjoyed! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D Love you, Karla! :D
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A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow.
This book won 'The Poetry Category'
Well done, Karla
Bobbi
Hope everything is over by now.
Love
Nico
God Bless
~Michelle~
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But really, Karla, what a powerful write, I can feel your fear and can imagine Natures wrath "raining" down on you! Hope you are well and be not afraid, "this too shall pass," ED
Love Tinak
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~Chrissie xx