Metastasized (Revised, Repost) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

An awsome write, my friend!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

Vivid, heartwrenching write; love the anology you used in this write! Brilliant work, Karla; very well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears < *NEVER FORGET!*

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

Excellent analogy Karla! this is a top class poem and a winner in my book! You did an expert job of writing with this one!I agree with your prayer for peace, if the world would repent and pray there would be peace! God said so, but people are jaded with the mundane world believing nothing can change and so nothing does.

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

I like your concept of terror as being compared to Cancer and metastasis..But there is a causal link missing which is site--as to where the tumors are located..I remembered a story of a heart sugery
where the surgeon replaced the left bicuspid valve whereas he was supposed to operate on the right one...similar operations on eye, brain..and even Kidneys have been reported..

I would argue that there can be a big margin of error about the jugdement and prognosis!

Justin D'Souza

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

beautiful, harmonious prayer...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

Totaly Awesome sweet pea...
Love it
Lady peg

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

ALWAYS A PLEASURE TO READ YOUR WONDERFUL WORDS MY FRIEND,GREAT WRITE.
CHARLIE

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 12, 2003

This is a super write.
Smiles
Taylor

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Fantastic and absolute. Terror is like a cancer...it does grow. And an all out strike will sometimes kill the patient and not the cancer...I agree ~Peace Is The Answer~
Great write and a powerful statement.
Allen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

This one hit hard, a friend of a friends and mine has discovered a lump in her breast and is going to get it checked, the fear alone is enough to swallow her up!
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

This was so powerful Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Prayer is definitely the only answer!!!

God bless,
Tim

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Many of us can do nothing but pray......
Thanks for sharing karla...
Your friend........Ron

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

They say that LOVE is powerful; but I feel that HATE is more so.

Sometimes people just hate another for no reasons at all. No one wants to be on the receiving line of the hatred. It is very destructive.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Karla this is so powerful...hate is so destructive...and hard to fight against...unless we fight it with love....great write...floria

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

You put it into words with excellence! Job well done! Here Here!
Brava!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Ah Karla, This was so powerful, I pray you find it,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Very explosive and vivid write, Karla and yet, so true. Let freedom ring!
(((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))
Jill :)