the angry sky was snarling. it was ripping, snorting mad. i knew we were in for it. it was going to get bad. i wore moisture like a coat. sweat was running down my brow. it was coming up a cloud. we were going to get plowed. it had been sunny and warm. but now black clouds filled the sky. A WARNING CRACK OF THUNDER! the storm would not be denied. i went in my apartment. stood looking out the window. did not like the looks of things. a stiff breeze began to blow. i then turned on my t v. to see where the storm would head. the radar screen came alive. the most intense part was red. that was to the west of us. it was heading straight this way. i went back to the window. the clouds roiled in dismay. lightning stabbed down in fury. shattered clouds cried out in pain. the wind shook my apartment. then came the hail and the rain. the thunder roared out my name. the storm had me in its sights. i was trapped with no escape. my nerves were trembling in fright. the sirens began to wail. where was i going to go??? a tiny room my shelter. didn't feel very safe, though. i don't like cramped, small places. but i hate storms even more. then the damn fool lights went out. my heart nearly hit the floor. rain was knocking to come in. the thunder muttered a grunt. "go away!" i cried in fear. (how i hate these stupid fronts.) it seemed it stormed forever. i thought i would go insane. finally, the storm passed by. my nerves were worn out and drained. severe storm season draws nigh. it happens this time of year. i hope it doesn't get bad. storms are not my thing, you hear? (i do not like storms at ALL!!)
Love the way you formatted this poem, Karla; an intense, imagery-filled poem that perfectly captures the drama of the storm and the fear you feel during storms! Very well done, Karla; enjoyed much! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
This is just great expressive writing Karla...
I hate the wind..and it has been so windy here
I am thinking spring storms are moving in..
thanks for all your prayers and support for
Ken...all is well...and I mostly thank God..
bless you..floria
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
AWESOME looks like lightening in form powerful poetry!!!!!
Karla maybe you should thank the storms for the great writes they give you, and they'll be kinder to you;-)hahaha...This is a fantastic write the form and all just wonderful!I know how frightening they can be, but I learned to make a friend of storms becaue I love to go out on my porch and watch them. I know some think I'm crazy;-)!
I agree with Ed...at least to the point that I love storms. My brother and I stood outside watching most of Isabel, our tropical disaster for the (hopefully) decade here in Virginia. But I also understand your fear...we do not have the horrifyingly devestating tornadoes that your area has...my sister lived in Georgia for a while, and thunderstorms still scare her silly...its not something to scoff at..,you be well, M'Lady...
Well, the power of Nature, I love it...I would stand at that window till it was right on top of me, saying something stupid like come and get me I dare ya...
So when you visit my funeral you should know I died with my pants on, screaming at the storm, but remember you are the smart one, you at least hid. Me, I have little sense, I have to see what it is I shuld be afraid of...
Yes the way you wrote that like a tornado or lightening bolt twisted is so cool an idea, wish I had thought of it...LOL! Keep your head down, incoming...Peace thru Nature, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Fantastic! Your word pictures are terrific and I love the design of the written words looking like a lightning strke!
SueB
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Who does? Just a way of life. Love the way you made the form of lightning. Stay safe..more of those booger bears will come.
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Love the way you twisted your poem to the form of the storms. March winds were blowing here but thats about it. Great write!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
I hate the wind..and it has been so windy here
I am thinking spring storms are moving in..
thanks for all your prayers and support for
Ken...all is well...and I mostly thank God..
bless you..floria
Love tinka
A wonderful poem, not overly fond of storms myself...
God Bless
~Michelle~
Reindeer
Where You Go From There Depends Your(Sheer) SINS!!!
TRASK
So when you visit my funeral you should know I died with my pants on, screaming at the storm, but remember you are the smart one, you at least hid. Me, I have little sense, I have to see what it is I shuld be afraid of...
Yes the way you wrote that like a tornado or lightening bolt twisted is so cool an idea, wish I had thought of it...LOL! Keep your head down, incoming...Peace thru Nature, Ed & Rufuz
SueB
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