Love's Lost Shadow (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2002

Very awesome metaphor's used to express your fantasy. A very unique voice.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on July 15, 2002

Deep and thought-provoking piece...well done!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2002

Super write--hair-raising chills...

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on July 15, 2002

Your work Lori really leaves a powerful effect. It makes you come back an review more. Continue to write. God was a poet the proverbs, Psalms. I find Lori that we as writers are the blessing from God. I can feel the peaceful calm. God bless

Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle

Reviewed on July 15, 2002

I think this poem could be excellent if you tightened it.

I like the following words:

The essence .... calls to me
...of hell all know my name
The ... of past passions

AWESOME:
The pain of the ancients
dwells in my shame

a sacrificial addiction

the angles ...
have bid me goodbye
...yesterday�s yore
know of my fame and beg me for more

GREAT:
If you crave for my passion
I'll drive you insane

Personally, would have enjoyed the poem more had you not then named it:

Satan, Lucifer, the Tempter of Man

I Like this:
I am yesterday's fallen
free from restrain
the perfect deceiver
and I know your name

INTERESTING:
deceiving your heart
with my time tested hate

I am love's lost shadow
I am victory's affliction
I am solitude's reaction
a sacrificial addiction

Reviewed by Donna Swanson

Reviewed on July 15, 2002

Well written but very sad.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 15, 2002

I have to agree with the rest ,it is awesome.

Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

A wanderful poem...

Reviewed by EMILY (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

Very unique good write

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

Great write Lori....

Trixie

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

OH PLEASE JOIN ME LORI IN MY AGONY!
Oh devil dance! Oh devil dance!
Let's do the devil dance
Until we fall into a trance
As Satan eats our burning flesh
while we do the devil dance!

Shadows fall the light grows weaker,
Now darkness shrouds our evil keeper,
We shout his name and scream and cry,
But we're alone and want to die.

It's to late now there's no answer,
We turned our backs on the MASTER.
We cast our lot with the grim reaper,
Now he'll always be our evil keeper.

Yes I am crazy. She how your brilliant work makes me go cookoo???????? Bill Hugs

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

A great poem Lori. Much food for thought.

Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

Hi Lori,
Outstanding!!!!!
Morchuis

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

Wonderful write!

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by T Cloth (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

Makes you wonder... religion or no... will a man sell his soul for love? Can love even be there, without a God who is Love itself? Wonderfully inspired write!

Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

wonderful!!!!!!.... great write!!!
hugs,
Chris

Reviewed by angel michael (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

I enjoyed the imagery......

~~michael~~

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

Lori, great one here. I like the sense of mystery that the discriptions give to the subject.
J.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2002

I agree with Eileen......your good!