Having learning experiences like these in the Autumn makes me really truly want to know your Autumn feelings? All you say is true, to the extent that Autumn doesn't seem to be so harsh as Winter, which it isn't, but much action is around in autumn also.
It is interesting to see haiku written in French and then in English. Wish I could actually understand French so that I could compare both versions and see if they are similar in translation or not... Stil, the English version is quite nice itself. Thank you for sharing.
Perfect imagery truly captures the essence of autumn. I would love to hear the French version as I imagine it to sound beautiful. But, the English version is just as beautiful and I thoroughly enjoyed it, Regis. Hugs and love, Elizabeth
Regis,
Oh my , now you really have my attention with this one. Brilliant. J'adore ma langue natale. oh mon dieu ,comme la langue française est belle.
nicole
Autumn you romanced perfectly. With words that may have tempted her to stay. Whispering. A Memory. A hesitant Luna. Words that tease the psyche. Jon Michael Willey
Lovely Poetic Express Regis'
EMBRASSE'
Love & Hugs Always
Vickie
Reviewed by JstImagine4Once (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Hi Regis..Excellent write, this is the first I've read your poetry and will definitely be reading more. Thankyou for the warm welcome. I hope to add many more pieces of my poetry to share with AuthorsDen. ~~JstImagine4Once~~
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
The imagery in these verses is exquisite. They reach out and draw the reader into each scene. Your words capture my experience of autumn here in Washington, D.C., where I have returned after 14 years abroad living in the desert. Thank you for encapsulating in this poem my entire experience of the fall. The last line is at once beautiful and touching.
I am your biggest fan and I love the imagery and the magic you bring to your writing. I am always saddened by the change of seasons especially from fall to winter where the beautiful sound of the fall fades into the winter hermit.
Dear Regis,
you capture the mood - ambivalence - the present and future, being sensed, the threads of suffering in our inner existence. Very good work!
All the best Franz
Why is my name not on this list of unbelievable reviews? I remember reading this...I know! I think it was the day Ziggy ate Joey's new shoes! LOL!
Autumn is my favorite time of year, for all the above reasons...
A beutiful piece of it, lies here...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
I sincerely wish I understood the French as well as the English at this moment, Regis, but it's a beautiful enough work for me just in the English. I like Kate Burnside's descriptions of the work almost as much as another piece of poetry--confetti through the mind, like wind chimes, etc. It is a fine piece of work...Jerry
What more can I add that hasn't already been said? You have many addmirers who can see your talents and can pen such words as to reflect your art back to you...
Well penned and the images are vivid. Thank you for sharing this...
Like confetti through the mind, this falls effortlessly and sweetly. Love the juxtapose of the French and English, which play together like wind chimes. So gentle, so tenderly melancholic. So evocative. And yes, Lady Autumn matches the mood and soul of this poem wonderfully. TY Regis. This lets me breathe. Love, Kate xx
Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
Reg --
I will always be autumn's friend and in your words find her all the more appealing. Beautiful writing.
Regis, this is truly beautiful and well written. I enjoyed it much...you've capture a scene of Autumn, full of images and life. This is a definite keeper. Also enjoyed the picture.
A melancholy write about the beauty that has left causing the tears to fall from heaven. This is a passionate and sensitive poem about how most of us feel when Spring, Summer, and Fall fade into the coldness of winter. Relfections of our lives and its passing.
Autumn, like a heart's tree letting the whitered one fall on a bed of rain tears.
Now we have two great French writing poets in our midst.
Great!!!
Georg
I found almost a forlorn feeling in your picture of autumn. Not enjoying the cold of winter, I relate to this wary write that brings a mood to autumn. Nice change to the “so pretty” poems that even I have written. This is great.
Most excellent write, Regis. Such a wonderfully accurate description of that transition between summer and winter...
Always the best of all things to you and yours,
Jim
Beautiful image and your words inFrench and english make this read twice as lovely. I wish I could hear this read in French. Gives me chills.
Love,
Susan
My dear friend Regis, how beautifully you described our season. Your wild geese just arrived here and rest on our meadows and help our fairies paint our trees too in order to be ready for Thanksgiving. Well done! You are a good poet model for me, since you are writing in French and in English. Great. Emile
Regis
Thai beautufl collection of autumn Kus
are outstandingly beautiful
Thanks for sharing
Peac be with you
Wishing you and family
A Happy thnaks giving
William
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2007
Breathtaking haiku's Regis, nothing more I can add . . .
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Oh my , now you really have my attention with this one. Brilliant. J'adore ma langue natale. oh mon dieu ,comme la langue française est belle.
nicole
EMBRASSE'
Love & Hugs Always
Vickie
Love the feeling I always get from your words.
~hugs~
Karen
Happy Holidays!
Pier
Merry Christmas, Janet xoxoxo
pax A
you capture the mood - ambivalence - the present and future, being sensed, the threads of suffering in our inner existence. Very good work!
All the best Franz
Autumn is my favorite time of year, for all the above reasons...
A beutiful piece of it, lies here...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Stay safe Regis...
Well penned and the images are vivid. Thank you for sharing this...
I will always be autumn's friend and in your words find her all the more appealing. Beautiful writing.
love,
Kathy
wither in comparison
such mellifl'ous verse
Gina
enjoyed...
Art Sun...
Blessings & Happy Holidays,
Joyce B.
Safi
Best regards,
Leland
Myrna
Love TinkaSweets
I've only published one piece in French
bill
God bless you. Kathy
La luna vacilante
Se esconde tras las nubes
Augurio de la tempestad
En la calle desierta
El viento juega con hojas caidas
Bajo un cielo palido
Un parque desierto
Los gritos alegres de los ninos
Solamente una memoria
Alla alto en el cielo
Los gansos salvajes estan volando al sur
Una senal de invierno
La oscuridad ha caido
El viento esta susurrando palabras
A travez de los cedros altos
Bajo los cielos de otono
Las hadas de otono han pintado
Las hojas de los arboles
Octubre ha llegado
La lluvia cae sin cesar
Estas lagrimas del cielo.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Sandie May Joyce :o)
Peace,
Dan
Happy Thanksgiving Regis!
Wishing you abundant blessings of love, joy & peace,
Joseph*
Carole~
This is a beautiful portrayal of the season and the woman...
Beautifully written. Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
"For the Beauty of the Earth..." Tom.
Now we have two great French writing poets in our midst.
Great!!!
Georg
--RaeLynn
Be safe,
Karen
sweet sounding language.
Pierre
You've definitely captured the feel of the season. (Perfect pic too.)
Larry
Always the best of all things to you and yours,
Jim
Fee
Love,
Susan
but my favorite is this:
Darkness has fallen
The wind is whispering words
Through the tall cedars
Blessings and Light ...
Richard
God Bless,
Lew
Thai beautufl collection of autumn Kus
are outstandingly beautiful
Thanks for sharing
Peac be with you
Wishing you and family
A Happy thnaks giving
William
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Nice Job,
Christine
Much love,
Bill
(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami, Karen Lynn de la Texas. :D