Yep! A lesson for the tongue-tied and shy here. Rejection is so painful; I spent almost two years at school following a beauty around - what a waste of my youthful young love ... ha ha!
Very deep piece Regis! It hit home with me because I have loved so many and felt ignored. Love can be cruel and silence only makes you hurt more. Love needs to be mutual for it to flurish. Sometimes it is mutual but one is afraid and backs away...Love, ~Chessly
OMG Reg, you know I can literally identify with this. The cold hearts of others put us under their icy feelings of unloving attitude. But that doesn't stop us from loving them. Do they really know what they are doing to us when they put thier loveunder the ice? It would be wonderful if we knew. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
This is truly an outstanding poem filled with truth....so profound are your words Regis....powerful, will be around for generations to come! Thank you for sharing and for caring! May the Lord bless you in a special way, and may His mercies never cease towards you!
...THE SILENCE OF THE 'ICE' WHICH...MAY...OR...MAY NOT...MELT, YET, THE LOVE OF ONE...WAITS. POWERFUL WORDS ON THE POWERFUL SUBJECT OF LOVE UNDAUNTED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Chilling, and yes that sense of desolation is icy...but think of springtime and thawing and melting and renewal...very powerful poem, Regis...it grips because it is stark.
A dried rose is still a rose and beautiful at that. But love under the ice screams to be heard. I've heard that scream many times and couldn't break through. Wow Regis! This piece really spoke to me! Gut-wrenching!
Regis, an emotional appeal from an aching heart. Unrequited love is a dragon with no flaming breath. Love once "under ice" is not easily exhumed. Your poem comes from a place where only experienced lovers have traveled. A powerful poem my dear friend. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael
Wow! This is very emotional and moving. The flow is perfect. The imagery is magnificent. And it's as if you tell a story with your words. And you do...
Titles in poetry are just as important as the poems. The title of this poem is great. Definitely makes me want to read the actual poem. It also lets me know that this is an emotional piece of writing and I can tell that it will be something I will greatly enjoy, which I did, a whole lot.
I see nothing that I would improve here. I think this poem is one of the top poems I've read by you.
Poems like these deserve to be put together in a book *hint* ...
Thank you so much for sharing this and please keep on writing.
Regis,
This poem feels like a letting go of something. Bit of a sad feeling with that, but there's also a sense of relief when letting go, no? One of your deepest writes as of late. Love and hugs,
Sheila
This takes the dark sides of love to new depths, Regis...glaciers melt and hearts warm...it's almost as if this was written from a past-life soul in search of the other. Be well.
Beautiful poem, Reg, I really enjoyed this read. I am getting frostbite just thinking about a love that could be so locked up and cold.
Take care,
Sherry
A collection of love poetry both relatable and unique.. Poems both joyful, playfu , yearning and romantic. The Poet has exposed his heart and soul in words of love and admiration. Take a journey through the thoughts of a Contempary poet of love. Poet
A collection of love poetry both relatable and unique.. Poems both joyful, playfu , yearning and romantic. The Poet has exposed his heart and soul in words of love and admiration. Take a journey through the thoughts of a Contempary poet of love. Poet
A collection of love poetry both relatable and unique.. Poems both joyful, playfu , yearning and romantic. The Poet has exposed his heart and soul in words of love and admiration. Take a journey through the thoughts of a Contempary poet of love. Poet
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thanks for reading my poem, On Burying a Husband.
It provides much to think about. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
Continued Success/
Barbara Henry
Kelie
Best to you; Denise
Happy Chinese New Year, Regis!
rege
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo
hug
Kat
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
your heart and soul spoken deeply inside grips me
...bringing blow torches
Vickie
Much Love,
Margaret
Beautiful poem and shows how love can literally be 'cold'. I love the way the poem flows.
Mary
As a fantasy of cheating death, it is one of the best of this genre.
Ron
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Gina
Susan
Peace,
Dayvid
Daniel
This is one of your latest best!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Nice work Regis
Titles in poetry are just as important as the poems. The title of this poem is great. Definitely makes me want to read the actual poem. It also lets me know that this is an emotional piece of writing and I can tell that it will be something I will greatly enjoy, which I did, a whole lot.
I see nothing that I would improve here. I think this poem is one of the top poems I've read by you.
Poems like these deserve to be put together in a book *hint* ...
Thank you so much for sharing this and please keep on writing.
Lena
This poem feels like a letting go of something. Bit of a sad feeling with that, but there's also a sense of relief when letting go, no? One of your deepest writes as of late. Love and hugs,
Sheila
Beautiful poem, which paints a vivid picture. Love it.
Anna
Carole~
Love TinkaSweets
Peace, Love and Blessings,
John Michael
Love,
Sage
When You Find That Out You Will Keep It As Secret (Silence) To Only Yourself...
TRASK
This sad poem touched my heart on so many levels--one of your best.
all the best,
Micki
Take care,
Sherry
And a wonderful probing exploration.
Blessings,
Christine
ann
Ciao,
Ragno Donna
Cheers,
Dan
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
John
Namaste
Chip Bergeron
A sorrowful lament. It is beautifully expressed and that is an intriguing picture.
God bless,
Lew
Love ya,
Fawn