A deep poem with a haunting feel to it. I am surprised to see that you don't have a book of poetry out yet. (Or do you?) I would be one of the first in line! Well done~ Sheila
Made chills run up my spine. The horror of war lives on in nightmares and flashbacks. Lost a dear friend who was never able to regain reality after returning from war. It just never ended for him. Thank you, Paul, for this. Elizabeth
Haunting and sad. . .but your sensitivity and talent create a beautiful rainbow at the end of that dark, dark tunnel. May you dream a happy dream tonight. . .and many more in the years to come. Always, and
we must be meeting on some astral plane. i am quite familiar with the experience you expressed so well here. what comes from the dream world, when as we slumber we are the closest to death as we can possibly can be, stirs so much emotion. the awakening can change our day, or even more so, our lives. great write!
And in my dreams,
It may well seem,
That my soul to take,
Is for God alone to deem,
If I should not wake.
I have to agree with Shee, Paul. This piece does get right to the bone of the matter. Our faith holds us steady, and we do not fear those that go bump in the night. Thank you for sharing, Paul.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my soul, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), SISTER Barbie
A chilling affect on the nightmares of war...No, "It Does Not Come Easy"...is right, Paul
You've penned it well...
Thank you for sharing!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Giving of yourself in spirit, is so sacrificial Paul!
YOur imagery was astonishing!
War makes me sick!
War makes me cry!
This write is right to the bone of the matter!
AS we pray!
WArmest Blessings and PEACE! Warm Hugs, Warrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Ooh, a bit eerie and mysterious write and very compelling one my friend...enjoyed hooked me the with the first couple of lines! Well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
A poet's sensitivity awakens when all seems to be asleep.
Greetings,
Axilea
oh that nightmare scape
very stylish.....
halloween is coming!
then, <3 Pea <3
It may well seem,
That my soul to take,
Is for God alone to deem,
If I should not wake.
I have to agree with Shee, Paul. This piece does get right to the bone of the matter. Our faith holds us steady, and we do not fear those that go bump in the night. Thank you for sharing, Paul.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my soul, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), SISTER Barbie
You've penned it well...
Thank you for sharing!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
YOur imagery was astonishing!
War makes me sick!
War makes me cry!
This write is right to the bone of the matter!
AS we pray!
WArmest Blessings and PEACE! Warm Hugs, Warrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Love Tinka
they will never end...
Take care Paul...
Blessings,
Joyce B.