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coming home (fiction)
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honey please don't cry
you know i must go
my number's been called
duty calls i must
go i don't want to

leave you

behind dry your tears
or i'll start crying
i'll write ev'ry day
i will let you know
when i'm coming home

hello, dear sweetheart
a brief note before
duty i miss you
thanks for the care
package the cookies

were good

shared 'em with the guys
thanks for the picture
of little leon
he's sure growin' fast
looks like his old man

a few words before
i have to go on
duty it's my watch
how i want this war
to be over done

right now

i miss you so much
more than you'll ever
know i love you in
only three short weeks
i'll be coming home

mrs. leon j. smith...
the united states army
regrets to inform you...
-----------------------------------------------------------
God, be with our men and women in the
Military...have mercy on them...and
protect them...AMEN.


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 Reviews of "coming home (fiction)"
Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
exterdonary poem, all too true for many families of fighting men

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2003
Very heartfelt, Karen.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2003
My friend, this is so very moving--brought tears to my eyes, too...

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2003
Yes Karla, this was very touching. They really need our prayers. Hugs Bill

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2003
Nicely done, Karla.
~E

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 25, 2003
This brought tears to my eyes. God help us all.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2003
Sad and moving, we can only hope & pray.

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
Reviewed on March 25, 2003
Prayers & Peace be with all those serving.....emotional write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 25, 2003
very moving Karla I'm praying with you...wonderful write...

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 25, 2003
Very touchy write...love n luck..BHUWAN

Reviewed by Buddy Angel
Reviewed on March 25, 2003
Amen
Buddy

Reviewed on March 25, 2003
Oh, this was so sad and moving! Just touched me so deeply,

Reindeer

Reviewed on March 25, 2003
heartbreaking ending to a powerful write! so sad! >tears < god be with our military men and women during this war; may they return home safe! god watch over our country and the world during this awful time! love, your twin, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) and >tears < :(

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 25, 2003
So real.. many will get this this letter. What a sad sad day for them all.
Great job expressing this!


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