Haiku: Tornado (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

A well-written haiku - I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Excellent..

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Excellent Karla!

Loved this!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

a little touch at the tornadoes back will turn off its tempers. a very beautiful Haiku.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

they sure will twist you around their finger ;)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

This imagery is perfect for the tornado! My mother was visiting my home when my daughter was younger and saw my clean home, Then my ex and daughter arrived home. Seconds later a totally mess. She said it was like a tornado had hit the house and her head was spinning! LOL. She never complained about my housework after witnessing that LOL. BTW My daughter is now very spotless much to my shock.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Wow Karla! perfect metaphor!wonderfully dynamic haiku!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Yes! This is a tornado!

~ May / Sandie ~

Reviewed by Valerie Roeske

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Karla, loved the image of this tornado, to bad the doctor couldn't find a cure for nature's feiry, loved this alot, take care and god bless, Val

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

You are just doing great with these karla...makes me want to try one..great work here girl...floria

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

WOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD. CREATIVE TOO.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Tornado's you can keep in Texas, Mz. Karla. Only send north the warmer weather as you have of late, thanks. Enjoyed this lil' piece of your forever complaining about the weather, LOL! Peace, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Karla, only a few words say so much. Great message even for adults who behave like children. Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Karla...this is a beauty!
Well done.

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

good image,

j+

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Nice one.Tornado turner

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Wonderfully written Karla. You title "Haiku Tornado", certainly agrees with your words!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

So true.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

we call it "Vloermoer"

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

Karla, this is so good. I like it when hikus kinda tell a story in 17 little words

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 8, 2004

(((Karla)))

you describe the tornado's fury to a t; wonderful imagery in this little haiku! well done, karla; truly enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D