Spring Haiku (2007)
A patch of bare ground
Winter is starting to leave
Its footprints behind
The sun is warming
It awakens the river
That sings under ice
All along the eaves
The icicles are weeping
In the warm spring sun
Suddenly one day
Frog choruses fill the air
Spring is on the breeze
Across pale blue skies
Skeins of wild geese fly northward
Hear their plaintive calls
Freshly opened buds
Fill the air with scents of spring
And quicken the heart
In the bare branches
Urging winter’s departure
A lone robin sings
Soft pussy willows
Nod in the gentle spring breeze
Amid melting snow
Wild Easter lilies
Bow their heads in faint sunlight
Of the forest glade
In the new season
Nature is once more renewed
Life flows like a stream
© Copyright 2007 Regis Auffray
Sheila
delightful write Regis..
V*
Love,
M.C.
Each verse in this one could stand alone. A vibrant poem to awaken the senses to Spring. Even now, I can hear the frogs singing through my open window. As they gather in strength and numbers, they will be somewhat of a nuisance with the racket they make, but still, they are a signal that Spring is here and I welcome them.
I love this one, Regis, and will be saving it to read again.
Skeins of wild geese fly northward
Hear their plaintive calls"
This is my favorite in this delicate string, Regis.
I can almost smell the daffodills. We had an unexpected freeze here in the South as well and many of the new buds are frostbitten.
Love, Taylor
Safi
I plan on keeping!
YOur imagery speaks elequently!
Thank you for sharing your heart!
I never read up on Haiku's~
I know these messages speak lots of beauty!
WArmly, WArrior PURPLE Lady Sheeeoox
Happy- Healthy - Spring!
Agnes
Myrna
blessin's,
cynth'ya
Sandy
Happy Spring!
Simply lovely.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
thank you,
Ron
Joyful write thanks for the sharing.
thank you and Happy Easter!
Gina
In the warm spring sun." Enjoyable read. R
What a beautiful poem you have penned here. The imagery here is awesome and I can feel the warm air beginning to stream in. This has been a wild winter here in New York too. Last week it was 70 degrees and today it is 35 degrees and windy.
I believe spring is a great season for all us poets/writers. There is something about spring that brings out the best in us.
Once again, another Awesome Write.
~hugs~
Karen
Certainly enjoy reading your positive works gives such a free flow~thanks, most befitting indeed!
Enjoyed the imagery flow also.
Blessings~heart and soul,
~Gwendolyn
Aberjhani
The song birds soon will be here as the "icicles are weeping." I rode down the stream of spring with you. Wonderful poem
Kathy
I can not improve upon what Georg has written - MAGNIFIQUE ! Tom.
steve
sounds and feel like spring to me
what a great share
Yep If You Let It Your Life Will Flow Like Stream...
Neat Eye Opening Write...
TRASK
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
were laid before him
and he chose them over
the gold, frankincense and myrh."
~Joseph
Thanks for this lovely springtime poem, dear Regis.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Best regards,
Leland
Rose
In the new season
Nature is once more renewed
Life flows like a stream
Beautiful! Peace. Joyce
The water in the garden giving the peaceful background music to weave the haikus like a strand of pearls.
More than brilliant!
Georg
I wish i could see some of that beautiful snow in TX
I have only enjoyed the gentle spring breeze
In my hometown, I do long to see snow!
I would love to lived in a places where
I could enjoyed all of that beauty my friend!
excellent imagery captured by your words!!
Love And Peace to You
Always Your Friend...Morning Star
Be safe,
Karen
Love,
Eileen
I live in the tropics and have missed Springtime for many years. Thanks for your poem, it was very descriptive and engaging and brought me back to fond memories. Well done!
Tom
Larry
Your great at these Regis
Thanks for sharing...I loved it!
Linda
Happy Spring!
Jean
You are gifted! I love haiku, and yors washes over me like the Spring Extravaganza it truly is!!! Lovely, truly, lovely! Thank you..
Actually, I had penned a few lines today myself: Our own daffodils were covered with fresh snow this morning...
Here's wishing you a marvelous Spring 2007, and a Blessed Resurrection
Celebration, Regis.
Love&Big Hugs, Rhonda & Jason (Lord-willing, he's coming soon for a 2-month visit!)
A short form to express large visions of time to come. Beautiful images.
Dennis
"Spring 2007" and any other throughout the millennia!
Magnificent composition in poetic Excellence!
In gratitude and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
erin
Carmen :-)
Blessings to you ...
Light and Wisdom ...
God Bless,
Lew
Happy Easter Dear One!!
Love TinkaSweets (not the bunny but the cracked eggy}
I have trouble stringing two together.
Absolutely wonderful tribute to spring.
Have a wonderful Easter.
Elizabeth
Rebecca
A beautiful haiku series; each stands on its own merit, but comprises a perfect package of renewal. Well done!!
(((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.
Sage
(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami, Karen Lynn a' Texas. :D
Paix et amour a toi! :)
Thanks
Dan