Pollen Dance (3 Haiku) (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Smolen

Reviewed on May 26, 2004

Beautiful Lori! Yes bring on the spring, lucky for me no allergies, lol Blessings~Shell

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty

Reviewed on May 21, 2004

aaahhh Spring
I am glad to now have any allergies

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

Enjoyed this very much, Lori...

Great Haiku!!!

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

Vivied descriptions
of life in full bloom!
Excellent! Thanks for reviews
you have left in the past!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

So very pretty, Lori

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

What lovely little gems Lori!

~Nikki~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

This just makes you take a deep breath and enjoy the beautiful serenity. Lovely poetry, Lori.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

so so very lovely lori

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

This is beautiful Lori : )

Jack

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

If only I could keep my thoughts from running long enough, I would love to try one of these forms! Nah, I just better leave up to you to do Poet, since you are truly gifted at saying so much with so little. I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing it. Keep The Faith.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

All three of these are extremely lovely, Lori.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

They are all beautiful but especially the last one. I was taken by the "party dresses." Well done.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

I love the word play in your haikus, Lori. The words flow and dance quite vividly on the page and are a beautiful breath of light.
Thanks.
Jill :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Lori, excellent Haiku but that pollen you speak of plays hell with my allergies.(lol) I love the way you tied these together.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Lori, haikus are your specialty. This one proves it. Delicate and inspiring. Lisa

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Simply gorgeous Lori...

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

A party I would like to attend....Nature sure has a way of making the seemingly most mundane things, a spectacle of beauty...you have captured this perfectly...as always such a joy to read your poetry...Thanx for sharing...Peace Abel

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

nice haiku Lori, you'er the best. l&p g

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Beautifully done...a haiku anywhere else would be pleased...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

EXCELLENT work, Lori!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2004

None beter done than this one.