Prey (5 Haiku) (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty

Reviewed on June 2, 2004

*grins*
another good one
too much Disney in my life
started humming the circle of life from lion king

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

your poems are always so refreshing and vivid ... great images ...

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Lori, the imagery is amazing, and your haiku's are simply remarkable!
Superbly written!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Outstanding haiku images that emphasize the "what'wrong" with this world. Always the prey and the victim - a constant theme. Thank you for this offering, Lori. Well done. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

I enjoyed reading these. Very nice, Lori.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

This is great. I love haiku, even
though I don't write many myself.
Nature preys without malice.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Simply great. I've even seen a jack rabbit:) But it was an armadillo i saw lose the bet, and a Texan got out and shot it. never for get it's screams and jumping.

These are all great..

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

It's the law of the jungle. That little bunny is trying to get home only to make a tasty treat for the fox. :) It's better to be higher on the food chain. Nice one, Lori. Love, Alex

Reviewed by Aamie Burnley

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

"nature loves her own" ... lovely and well said.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

I love your poems Lori!!!!!

Reviewed by Robin Spicer

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Greetings Lori
In my minds eye, your words take flight and i see the creatures of which you write.
I love it.
Robin

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Mother Nature at her finest. Outstanding creation Poet. I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

These are all excellent, Lori. Think I like the wolf one the best; but I'm a big wolf fan.

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Great write...
Maybe you could try something Gothic in style next...

Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Lori, you excell at this form...I love the whole circle of life and nature theme...again I am at a loss to pick a fav. I love them all....thanx for sharing...Peace Abel

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Lori, these are excellent. My favorite is the second one, very nostalgic.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Excellent!
Great Haiku!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Your great with these...
Your great anyhow.........

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Wonderful Hi-Q's Lori!!

Love Tinka