Watched (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

I could smell the trees and feel cool air, very vivid piece!

Reviewed by Sara Russell

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Elegantly and concisely written, with a vivid flair for imagery.

Sara

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Ahhhh, beautiful, peaceful state of grace. Lovely!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Yep. The varmits and insects about in the wild. Red bugs, looking for a home. Mosquitoes, dive bombing. Sorry about the reality check. Lovely poem.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Short but well written!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

watched by a million unseen eyes

Marvelous Poem, Lori! And so very true, for those wise enough to understand.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

So true.. thank God there are no traces of place my eyes have seen...lol

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

so light and wonderderful

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

I felt myself there.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Excellent haiku poem...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

has a natural beauty to it ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Lori...Your Star continues to rise in AD
This is simply gorgeous..almost haiku like rendition...
Peter

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

I love this...being a city dweller, I miss the country so much. Thanks for a little walk through a fresher, cleaner place Lori! This is beautiful. Michelle

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

very nice
taking a lot of nature hikes recently, this reminds me of them :)

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Well written. Bravo!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Unseen by you, although you are seen by them, that is all they need to know you are no threat, this poem is wonderful, Lori, I just love Nature writes too...Peace found, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Sandie is right and it is fantastic!!!!!!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

This poem can be read in more than one way. Good work Lori!

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

This is the forest glen where I live. it is a haven for good and nature. Beautiful!
Susan

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

Watched By Satans(Demons() Eyes!

Note: Whence You are With (God) Watch as You Walk By In The Masses,i.e. They Cringe In Fear When I,TRASK Walk On By!

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

A virginal poem with a killer last line!
Wonderful, Lori!

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

nicely done-

j+

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 11, 2004

(((o, lori)))

chills went up and down my spine--splendid nature write! we are only visitors in their home. we are the strange ones. :) BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)