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Doe's Eyes
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
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5 random ku.

summer moon

in yesterday’s shadow

a peach

--

 

touching

distant shores

can we be one

 

--

 

poaching

in the shadow of the moon

doe’s eyes

--

 

at song’s end-

empty cross

exalted pulpit

--

walking the shoreline-

grandmother’s shadow

upon my own

 

 


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 Reviews of "Doe's Eyes"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 28, 2009
Beautiful and well done! I've much to learn!...M

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on July 27, 2009
Splendid again... Especially the second!! So true :-D

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on July 23, 2009
Truly Lovely, with a magical flow. This was a joyful read! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 19, 2009
Little wonder your Ku's have been published, they are excellent.

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on July 19, 2009
Lovely, I especially like the 4th and 5th ones.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 18, 2009
Lori, you have a real feel for genuine haiku, as I know it.
Each of these is a lovely moment in time to be captured and
treasured. -gene

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 18, 2009
Beautiful writes each a true gem
Thank you for sharing
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2009
Interesting & nicely done.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 17, 2009
All like
succulent raspberries
to be savored

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
Not so random. Enjoyed very much. Patrick

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
LITTLE AMOUNT OF WORDS WITH CLEAR MEANINGS. DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
Lori,
Each perfect in its own right; the final one, masterly.
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
Lori, methinks you found your specialty! They are so meaningful yet
lose no beauty in being succinct!Each one a gem!especially love the last;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
loved each and every one of them and especially their diversity. Each meaningful and complex in its own right, but especially the pulpit one and I love the peach! :)) xx

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
Beautiful...especially the last one. There's a whole story in every one of these...nicely done.

Anna

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
The last one had me awash with emotion. You are so amazing with these Ku, Lori. You manage, in so few words, to say so much. Each of these has an intense image that it projects. Using the word "poaching," was brilliant in your third Ku.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 16, 2009
Like them all, but I especially like the last one.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 15, 2009
How sweet, serene and soothing...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 15, 2009
nice montage of ku, Lori ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 15, 2009
Almost Romantic To The Touch...

Really Different...

TRASK


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