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Light - 4 ku
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
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sunset-

a monet moment

on god’s canvas

 

absorption-

prisms play chess

on my wall

 

Andromeda-

seeing my neighbor

as she was

 

light-

seen by many

but only one

 


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 Reviews of "Light - 4 ku"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on September 9, 2009
Beautiful Lori! I like the message......M

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 31, 2009
I hate the ku, but 4u, OK, 4 will do, sweet-2, CU.

Ron

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 26, 2009
WELL DONE...MUCH SAID WITH A FEW WORDS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on August 26, 2009
kung 4 ku Lori, rockem sockem, cheers

Reviewed on August 25, 2009
compulsive read and deeply absorbing

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 25, 2009
Lori I think the first three are knockouts, just outstanding. The last one I'm kind of scratching my head over, as in, one finally sees the light?? Patrick

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Snapshot images riding the light wave mental absorption of a divine peace (piece).

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
... according to Gene's definitions below, I think all four of these qualify, Lori. Such insight and perception: the Andromeda ku is sheer brilliance! :)) These are like epiphanic instants, as befits your title. xx

Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Love these ... especially the one on Andromeda. Seeing your neighbor as she was ... 200 million years ago.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Lori, the Japanese poet Yasuda defines a haiku moment as one "in which the words which created the experience and the experience itself can become one." To me, your sunset haiku fulfills the
aesthetic moment beautifully. -gene.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
These are very nice Lori. Quite elegant oozing with serenity.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
Lori,,I just love all of these :) just wonderful!!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
The first one is definitely my favorite.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
very pleasant Ku's that create images as fast as they are read...

Fee

Reviewed by Ankin Timourian
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
Interesting! Soooo much can be said with less words.
Very nice!
Ankin

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
These images are strong and pop right into view- i really liked the first one as I often call skies "Maxfield Parrish skies," so I enjoyed your "Monet sunsets" and pictured them instantly. :) Michelle

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
excellent montage of ku ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
Nicely done, Lori; substance for reflection. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
Lori,
Exquisite rendering in each one, finely realised images and perfect impact. No favourites here, all stand out.

John

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
Kool...

TRASK...

Reviewed on August 23, 2009
from u...4 stately ku...reward's in reading

And that's a fact...you are sooo good girl! :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
Brilliant!! Amazing how your few words inspire such deep thought. Loved them all!

Anna

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
Each of the chain is exquisite, Lori, wish I could choose a favorite. Singly each paints such a perfect picture that with every read, a different one becomes my favorite. Together, they form a perfect collage. Well done!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
I like your wording. Very nice. I'm more a 5-7-5 kinda old fogy.

Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
Thoughtful and well defined haikus
You have the knack

Jerry


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