Lori I think the first three are knockouts, just outstanding. The last one I'm kind of scratching my head over, as in, one finally sees the light?? Patrick
... according to Gene's definitions below, I think all four of these qualify, Lori. Such insight and perception: the Andromeda ku is sheer brilliance! :)) These are like epiphanic instants, as befits your title. xx
Lori, the Japanese poet Yasuda defines a haiku moment as one "in which the words which created the experience and the experience itself can become one." To me, your sunset haiku fulfills the
aesthetic moment beautifully. -gene.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2009
These are very nice Lori. Quite elegant oozing with serenity.
These images are strong and pop right into view- i really liked the first one as I often call skies "Maxfield Parrish skies," so I enjoyed your "Monet sunsets" and pictured them instantly. :) Michelle
Each of the chain is exquisite, Lori, wish I could choose a favorite. Singly each paints such a perfect picture that with every read, a different one becomes my favorite. Together, they form a perfect collage. Well done!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
I like your wording. Very nice. I'm more a 5-7-5 kinda old fogy.
Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2009
Thoughtful and well defined haikus
You have the knack
Ron
aesthetic moment beautifully. -gene.
Fee
Very nice!
Ankin
Regis
Exquisite rendering in each one, finely realised images and perfect impact. No favourites here, all stand out.
John
TRASK...
And that's a fact...you are sooo good girl! :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke
Anna
Take care,
Sherry
You have the knack
Jerry