Odd that I should read this today, the fifth anniversary of my beloved godson's death. Thank you for it. In some way, it has made this day more bearable. It never gets easier, just ... different.

Write on and blessed be.

You place tribute upon our most heroic men and women Gene, though we are saddened by their loss and the unfortunate emotions they leave upon us, it is a great Honor to have them strive for freedom...

nice work..

Art Sun...

Oh my this packs a punch Gene, invokes such emotions and images.

"out of strength, sweetness" - this is the motto, I think, of a famous golden syrup brand whose ancient logo is a hive of bees working in the belly of a "fallen" lion. Sorry, this is a bit obtuse, but I'm fumbling for the rich, syrupy feel this elegant tercet gives me, like an anointing of oil somehow. This is so scent-sual/sensual, appealing to mind and emotions; visual and stirring. Have to agree about the weightiness, the glory inherent of those "dropped a-s" in the final line. Superbly crafted, but somehow intuited writing, too, I think. Very inspired and inspirational. Beautiful, Gene! xx

oh pass me a tissue....

Perfect, from title to composition. Short, but full impact. ~ Sara

Wow! These few words immediately immersed me into the scene as I lay staring up at the blue sky along side the soldier. I felt the earth move and the breeze on my cheek while he felt nothing at all. Thank you Gene for this emotive words. Hugs, J'nia

Whenever a poem is short with a few words,it is always powerful to the mind,heart and soul.This is indeed one of them.Thank you for sharing it.take care

EDWIN

So few words that tell so very much.

Gene, this picture tells a tremendous story of the ultimate valor and sacrifice -- your words memorialize our fallen heroes -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

In few words you speak volumes.. well done, my friend..)

Myrna

An interesting variation (6-8-6) of the Haiku/Senryu (5-7-5)

I agree with Axilea and I like John's use of the word "dignified." I can feel the experiential nature of this ku emanating from your pen.

The words "heavy" and "fallen"
have a strong impact and echo.

Axilea

Lovely 'Ku--just a few words and everything necessary said!

A sober reminder of the price of war. Nicely written.

Peace,
Dan

wow Gene..I bow my head

Reading this ku, what's coming to mind? "All quiet on the western front" The fallen soldiers will thank your thoughts.

Georg

Can read this one, gene, as patriotic or condemnatory of war. Guns n Roses!

Gene,
A dignified and very moving stillness (no pun intended) distinguish this poem.
John

Superb offering matching the heaviness of heart
for those who mourn the warrior!....

ET

Gene so many words are spoken in such a few lines. Touches the heart. Your words are always worth reading. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

a solemn yet potent pen ...

The dichotomy is startling, Gene. Very fine ku...Lin

Hi Gene, such a power punch here. I love how so few words can say so much. Thank you for sharing this...

In Spirit,
Bear

I can see his sun bleached bones as the seasons pass. Vivid ironic snapshot of death amidst nature's beauty--the flag speaks volumes since it is the symbol used to stir up patriotism sending men off to fight wars both necessary and not.

great job

"Silent guns." It's how the war is being lost. Well said Gene.

Powerful impact in few lines - lest we forget. Well done, Gene.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Packs a punch right between the eyes! WOW! EXCELLENT!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(