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A Tribute to the Young
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A Tribute to the Young


We met first on the training field
He a 'shave tail' lieutenant just out of college
Months later we had grown up
The baby-faced man and I stayed
While other went to schools and assignments
By combat time he commanded a full battalion
Proudly wearing a major's gold leaves
He was tough and fair
His men's needs always met by sunset
To the man his one thousand soldiers were ready
He was in charge totally
We loved him without saying so
Fighting the enemy for more than a month
Casualties were higher every day
He needed to check on his "boys" - to make sure
A single shell took out nine
Including a 25-year old commander
His remains rested in a body bag
On the tag his name rank serial number
And on the back of the tag lying on his chest
Printed in tearful bold letters
Words of ultimate respect
- 'The Old Man"


F William Broome 2008

     

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Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
To die so young amongst those even younger does make him a man to be honored with the words "The Old Man" - such a loving sentiment. I read this and was sad for all those whose lives ended too quickly.

A wonderful tribute. Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
wow--stirring and moving write

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
As Carole said a very heartfelt write ... and one that I am proud to have read! Well done tribute to a soldier! Great work, my friend.. M

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
The courage to battle the evil foe for the safety of one's fellow man. Is the greatest form of respect to be shown for your fellow man. To the legions of America's best over the centuries can truly be said, noblesse oblige. For they were America's nobility for the moment. Your perspective is obviously rooted in your service to America. God bless you for your sacrifices and courage. I admire your poetic works. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Very heartfelt write Bill...

Carole~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
At the risk of being branded a chauvinist, I will say this is a man's write and one that we who grew up of the old school will truly relate to...John Wayne standing with cigar in the corner of his mouth and helmet askew giving a final salute...

Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
"Walther" was also called The Old Man, but not for that he could be the father by age of the one under his charge, but for the respect he extracted from them.
Nice one soldier!!!
Georg

Reviewed on January 16, 2008
He will not be forgotten, thanks to these poignant lines memorializing his sacrifice. Well done, Bill.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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