Two Ku (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

I don't know anything about Ku's but I love reading them.
These verses are short, intense and expressive and I like that!
and I can see them "melding" into ONE! As morning comes...

WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Hugs, Purple Lady Passion, SHEExooo

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Very nice Lori, and I agree they do go hand in hand. I love this stuff! It's so clever that so much is said in a couple of words.

Anna

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on July 1, 2009

Oh yes, they certainly could be. Patrick

Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary

Reviewed on July 1, 2009

Very nice imagery.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on July 1, 2009

Nicely done. Beautiful imagery.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 1, 2009

Beautiful Kus,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on July 1, 2009

Well written.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

the first write is my favorite, but both soothe.........:)

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

Nice work.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

Blended literacy! Inseparable!

Sage

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

As it turns out, Lori, these two haiku seem to belong together.
My kind of haiku. Thanks. -gene.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

Lori, the thing I enjoyed most about both of your Ku's is that they are extremely visual. Well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

I love them and how together they tell a story that the reader gets to finish...well done.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

Both quite good, Lori.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

Perfectly done, Lori.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 29, 2009

good one Lori, made me think, cheers

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on June 29, 2009

How grand it will be, when white-capped waves roll into the setting sun. Be Well, Carin

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 29, 2009

GORGEOUS - two moods captured in few words, perfect, Lori.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on June 29, 2009

A few words speak volumes with seeking hearts.

always,
randy

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 29, 2009

Like your Ku & you...e

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on June 29, 2009

These are soothing to the soul, Lori, I love them both. In so few words paint such beautifully detailed pictures. Wonderful work, it is nice to see that no rust settled on you during your absence.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 29, 2009

Exquisite Lori,separate or together;-)...ET

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on June 29, 2009

Lori,
Yes, they are connected in mood and even setting and certainly in their rich evocation.
John