Haiku - Two Sets (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 27, 2009

summer tomatoes
laughter and smiles-
grandfather�s sweat

Brilliant, Dear Lori!! Filled with so much love and goodness! Warms the heart and soul immensely!! xox :-D

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

This is excellent,I enjoy reading it,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 22, 2009

Lovely berries.
Number 4 cracked me up - so sweetly cynical.
Syllable formatting is a methodology that can,
at times, pile sandbags in the flow.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

You truly are gifted in this genre, Lori. I absolutely love your haiku. They're always fun and entertaining.

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

You're brilliant in this genre, Lori. You choose just the right images which speak volumes in themselves - then, coupled with your acute insight and gift of wry humour or touching sentiment, you always either deliver a punch with panache or let us down gently into a sense of blissful calm. I always look forward to these! ThanKu Kate xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

love the compostion and the images splashed onto the pages of time. well done Lori
hugs\fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

summer tomatoes
laughter and smiles-
grandfather�s sweat

Marvelous!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Well done

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

breaking from tradition and format can be fun and challenging, watchout for the fire ants Lori, cheers

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on July 20, 2009

texas heat-
fire ants find shade
in my shoe

This cracked me up! And you made your grandfather do all the work?
I liked. Patrick

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 20, 2009

Ouch, could do without those fire ants! The others I find fascinating, nice writing...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 20, 2009

The first two are my favorite, but each paint a perfect portrait. I Love these! 5-7-5...much different in Japanese.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 20, 2009

What a joy, Lori, to share your haiku moments. -gene

midday dance
underfoot the squeak
of hot sand

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 20, 2009

Kool...

TRASK...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 20, 2009

Wonderful haiku, Lori. That second one has me curling my toes. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 20, 2009

Lori,
Struck gold again, gorgeously evocative.

John

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 20, 2009

THEY ARE SYLLABLES LORRI; 5-7-5. THANKS FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS